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Material Girl : Repercussions by HeartGear Material Girl : Repercussions by HeartGear
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Purpose: This comic is setup for the rest of the story arch, a mandatory bridge point connecting the initial incident to the resulting chaos.

Feelings: Conveying the information clearly was a challenge. How does one establish setting (return home) and action (attacked by inanimate objects) and still maintain any level of art?

Answer: Well, messing with the panels for a start. Like breaking panel two for instance, and the sense of time expressed in panel three. After all, comedy is 99.9% timing.

Initially I had a dialogue bubble of Noah (protagonist) saying (Oh well...) in panel three. I showed it to :iconthemightypegasus: and she suggested removing it entirely. It certainly creates a sense of timelessness.

Medium: Pencil and Paper
Time: Three hours
Material Girl (c) Me
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EducatedRodent Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Something about the way he stands in panel 3 makes me wonder about his original gender view.
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unit1138 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2011  Hobbyist
hes got a leg/hip poped out which really doesn't help him
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HeartGear Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
It is rather curvy...
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MarioMaestro Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2008
First a concussion, then attacked by clothes. This is not his day...

Faved,as I will the rest of the series.
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Choco-Kun Featured By Owner May 15, 2008  Professional Filmographer
Oh! PWNED big time!
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Smocksinabox Featured By Owner May 15, 2008
I agree with the cat. In addition to timing, the pause makes the impending catastrophe that much more spectacular.
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