SL 181

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Artist's Comments  

7/29/16

It's amazing the difference toning makes.   Now when I get to that last panel I just.... I feel really uneasy.   Which I guess is what I was going for. 

Ah, the perspective in panel 2 is kinda messed up, just don't think about it too much and everything will be juuuuust fine.

Event though this whole convo takes place in a car, I'm trying to keep it interesting by varrying the angles and distance from the characters, plus the body language and expressions.   Still, it's daunting... storytelling.   When I write the damn thing I never know how it's going to feel exactly with the art.   And even with the lineart put down, the toning can totally change the impact of a statement or a panel.

Anyway, enough navel gazing for tonight.   Be sure to tune in tomorrow for our Request stream starting at noon and going until the evening.   Requests have been made ahead of time by patrons  ^^

Here's where the stream will be held.  www.twitch.tv/defaultdamsel

Thanks for stoppin by!

ps cont error = no gloves in p 4 for hart.   Note to self to fix!


7/28/16

I am the tired now I transform into asleep! 

UGH, re reading.   I need to change that last panel to a closeup on them two to show their startled expression.   Tried to introduce some levity but wondering if it's not tonal whiplash.

Woooo making comics woooooooooooo

Oh and the art in panel 4 is placeholder it will be more serious I promise.   Cuz now it is so goofy it hurts my brain.


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FEATURED ACTORS/ACTRESSES


TD's Aquila 'Aq' Erickson is playing the part of Hart's partner!

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CONTENT WARNING

This comic will be handling kidnapping, sexual violence, and repercussions thereof in a more realistic way.   If this is at all triggering to you, you may want to consider avoiding this section and continuing SL when we move on to Cherry Blossom Girl or Hilda Hartlilly, which will both be considerably more lighthearted in tone.