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Here we go again!  Jumpin right back into it.   Illustration choice comin tomorrows

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I deliberated a lot on whether or not to focus on the clothes or on the "entrapment" aspect of this short, and after talking it over with Al decided to go with entrapment.   And what better way to make a "living doll" than lock braces on each of the joints!   I'm not sure how this would actually work irl, but for the sake of the fantasy I think it works just fine.

Spared a little of the creepiness this time around.   Except for that whole... existential dread of being blind, mute, unable to move and totally at the mercy of a potentially malevolent force.

There'll be a voteable thang on p 160!   So look forward to that ^^

-Heart

PS  Thanks to everyone who put in their two cents on the "update pages directly" topic.   Givin the response, I've decided that's what we'll be doing from now on.

Oh, note to self:  change the dialoge bit at the end to "I... I can't move!" and put it white text in black box to indicate thought.